Nikki Elbaz: My theory was that we had ourselves a little fan club, local people who
were interested in the farming community and the local food economy that Harvey was
building. They loved the updates that were built into the promotions, but for some
reason they didn’t want a membership welcome to.
Nikki Elbaz: Email swipes, where we peek behind the scenes at the emails that catch
your attention and earn their place in your swipe file. Every other week we’ll talk to an
email expert about an experiment they ran, and in the following episode we’ll dive into
the strategies and methods used in the email so you can inform and inspire your own
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Nikki Elbaz: We’ll get straight to the point. Get a free bag of Orym’s famous cinnamon
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The first thing I want to share. It’s so easy to criticize brands’
marketing
Nikki Elbaz: The first thing I want to share.
Nikki Elbaz: Is a bit funny as a takeaway, but I think it’s an important perspective so I’m
going to share it.
Nikki Elbaz: It’s so easy to look at a.
Nikki Elbaz: Brand’S marketing and nitpick and I am totally talking to myself here. I
mean, that is my entire LinkedIn content strategy.
Nikki Elbaz: I collect interesting things that I see.
Nikki Elbaz: Around and I point out why they do or don’t work. But number one, you
don’t necessarily have the full picture. I remember one time we were working with a
client and the email that we were tasked to write had a goal of getting customers to
cancel. Yes, to cancel. That was the goal of the email. We were trying to push people
away, customers away. Now, if I came along and received this email without knowing
the goal, I would have read it and listed all the things that they were quote unquote
doing wrong and why it would increase cancellations. So number one, you don’t
understand the full picture. Number two, marketing teams are humans. Humans with
limited resources or limited capabilities, or both sometimes.
Nikki Elbaz: Usually.
Nikki Elbaz: Really, they’re really smart teams and they know they’re doing something
wrong, but they just don’t have the time or budget to do it better. Everyone knows the
best practice of don’t discount deeply always, and we love to hate on the brands that
send endless once in a lifetime sales. Often it is a really bad strategy and it’s an
intentional strategy that they are doing and it’s not great. But sometimes there’s a good
reason that a brand isn’t doing things right. In the case of Harvey, it was a timing thing.
A birthday happens when a birthday happens. Should they pretend they were founded
in August to drum up summer sales? That doesn’t work. So takeaway number one
before you tear down a company, give yourself a humility check. You’re probably right,
and that huge flashing two hour countdown will reset as students refresh the page. But
sometimes there might be room for better judgment. To this note, stay tuned for episode
28, in which I interview a really amazing founder who is full of altruism. The crazy thing
is that some people just don’t believe him. They think his offer is too good to be true
because they’re stuck in that judgmental zone. I mentioned in last week’s episode that.
Nikki Elbaz: We couldn’t just lower our offer because.
Nikki Elbaz: The old leads who had seen the higher discount wouldn’t convert. This is
slightly untrue because of the beautiful thing called segmentation. Another solution that
we could have utilized would be to segment the list by old leads who had seen the deep.
Nikki Elbaz: Discount from the holidays or the birthday.
Nikki Elbaz: Sale and make a new segment for the fresh leads who never saw that deep
discount. Ultimately, this free gift was a simpler solution, but it was something that was
on the table. It wasn’t a long term solution. If we split the list long term, we would have
to offer two offers for every promotion, and the conversions that we would see from the
old leads likely wouldn’t equal out to the amount of work that it would generate to have
two offers running simultaneously. But we were toying with the idea of running a win
back style campaign for the old leads, a sort of last ditch attempt to convert them.
Instead, we took the orums pop up as an opportunity for a free gift offer, and we did a
light research sprint to try to understand why they weren’t converting. But I’m getting
ahead of myself. That’s takeaway number four. Meanwhile, let’s wrap up takeaway
number two, which is to segment your list, but to do so with a grain of salt. At minimum,
you want to be sending to your engaged segment, but the segmentation options are
endless. Each time you’re aiming to segment, ask yourself why. How many more
conversions can you anticipate from the work of this segmentation? How much better
will the customer experience be? You need to make sure that the work of segmenting is
worth the investment.
Nearly every ecommerce opt in in the World Wide Web is a 10%
discount
Alright, now let’s move on to discounting as an opt in strategy. Nearly every single
ecommerce opt in in the World Wide Web is a 10% discount. This is true even for
brands that never discount, which doesn’t make any sense. If they’re coming in at a
discount, they’re going to keep looking for a discount. Now, it’s true that shoppers have
been conditioned to look for discounts as a whole. That’s the way the ecommerce
industry has been built. But there are many
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brands that build sustainable growth even without relying heavily on discount. We don’t
need to lean into that conditioning right from the get go. So does that mean your opt in
shouldn’t be a 10% discount? That depends on so much. It depends on how big your
list is and how badly you need to grow it. It depends on your overall discounting
strategy. It depends on what other things you can offer. But should you default to 10%
just because that’s what your Klaviyo popup template is pre populated with no way test,
test, test. So takeaway number two, test your offers. Testing in email offers is obviously
more complicated than testing pop up or site offers, but it can still be done. But at
minimum, test those site offers.
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Okay, now for the research sprint I mentioned earlier.
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solutions either. They work because Nikki gets you to understand the essential
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Takeaway number four, answer questions with research. Sprint
running email tests is its own form of research
Okay, back to our show.
Nikki Elbaz: The Harvey list had a really interesting subpopulation. A large number of
subscribers were super, super engaged. They would read all the emails, but.
Nikki Elbaz: They wouldn’t click through.
Nikki Elbaz: We did see that very clear button copy did better than fun or clever button
copy, but still the click rate wasn’t matching the read rate. My theory was that we had
ourselves a little fan club. Local people who were interested in the farming community
and the local food economy that Harvey was building. They loved the updates that were
built into the promotions, but for some reason, they didn’t want a membership. I was all
set to start talking to nonprofit experts to get their insights on how they convert
armchair supporters. But then we ran a light research sprint a survey and a couple of
interviews and the why aren’t you buying? Segment had so many answers for us. It
gave us a ton of material and angles to work with. So takeaway number four, answer
questions with research. Dont just guess ask. But im going to contradict myself here in
takeaway number five. If youre just not getting customers to agree to an interview, or
youre sensing that people arent being honest with you, or your question isnt huge
enough to warrant a research. Sprint running email tests is its own form of research.
Lets take the example of my theory that we had this segment of armchair supporters.
How could I have tested this without talking to them? We could have changed their
buttons to drive to blog posts with more update style content. If the click rate went up,
that would be a good indicator that they’re just there for content. So takeaway number
five is remarkably similar to takeaway number three. Takeaway number three is to test
your offers. Takeaway number five is to test whatever it is that you need answers for.
The difference is that testing offers or buttons or things like that has the goal of
improving your metrics, testing things to answer questions testing for research has a
different goal, which is understanding your subscriber base. In the example of switching
buttons
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Nikki Elbaz: from joining the Harvey membership to blog posts, that would have
definitely lowered the paid conversion rate, but it would be worth it in the short term to
understand what that segment needs and what’s motivating them. Two more short
takeaways. I mentioned briefly that the email was straight into the point, and that’s an
important copy principle. The easier the sale will be, either because it’s a low price point
or there’s a lot of desire or pain that needs to be assaulted. The easier the sale, the
shorter the copy can be. You don’t have to do a lot of convincing, you can just move out
of the way to allow the conversions to happen. So takeaway number six, know your
audience and offer and match it to the length of the copy and the heaviness of your
persuasion. Last thing I just wanted to point out again how crazy it is that.
Nikki Elbaz: $5 can equal $50.
Nikki Elbaz: What am I talking about? Well, the fact that people converted for the free
gift of donuts but didn’t for the $50 off membership. Clearly there were some who
werent around when they were offering the $50 off or the $100 off. Clearly there were
some who regretted not joining and decided to cut their losses and not wait around for
the next sale. But the fact remains that we have to remember the place that emotion
plays in sales. There is something so psychologically enticing about a free gift,
especially for one thats exclusive and sells out fast. And even more importantly, money
isnt just money. There is no such objective thing as valuable. Everyone is going to
define things differently and we can use that to our advantage or it will be to our
disadvantage if we forget about it and constrain ourselves to the logical numbers only
dollar amount of something that we’re offering and that’s takeaway number seven.
There is no such thing as face value and that can be a good thing or a bad thing
depending on how much you pay attention to it and how well you frame it. Thanks for
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